Teacher Rough Cut Feedback

General Feedback:
Your video is fabulously unique. The selection of mise-en-scene is brilliant, the sets, props and costumes are all approriate to the genre and expertly constructed.
The video is very obviously not in the correct order yet, this needs correcting ASAP, there are some unsteady sections which I assume is just because you haven't edited it properly yet.

Feedback on Representation of Artist
There is a good use of close-ups which could be enhanced if there were more in the beginning in order to firmly establish your artist.
I am intrigued by your live action section. Plan it very carefully and ensure that it is good quality footage as it would be a shame if poorly filmed live action reduced the current high quality of your video.

Your video has a charm to it which makes your viewer smile. Keep up the good work.