Response to Feedback

Overall, many of the points that were mentioned we were aware of, as we have not had the time to do any editing yet, e.g. fitting the shots with the lyrics, so it all relates. This was maybe why our storyline may have not been obvious to the viewers. We were glad somebody noticed the link with childrens programs as this was one of our main influences for the video and the stylistic elements of directors Hammer & Tongs.